Autobiographical Narrative Prewriting.

The Love Storybird

The Love. on Storybird

9/11 Paragraph

Jen was on her way going to school, eating breakfast you know the normal things people do before going to school, putting make up on. Her friends’ boyfriend called her on the phone and said turn on the TV America is being attacked. She turned it on and she saw the second plane go in and then saw the towers crumble on the TV. Jen tried to wake up her boyfriend at the time where she lived. He was asleep and didn’t understand what was going on. Jen also said everyone started calling each person that they new to see if they were OK and if they had more information than what the TV was talking about. She was terrified and didn’t know what to do.

Dog Star Timeline.

In the story, “Dog Star” by Arthur C. Clarke, it seems that the narrator regrets leaving to the moon and leaving Laika behind. For example, the narrator says in the text “I had deserted someone who loved and trusted me.” This show’s that he cared so much for Laika and the fact that she died made him feel sorry. Another example is that in the text it says, “Though I never forgot Laika, in a little while the memory ceased to hurt.”
That means that even though he was on the moon he missed Laika and it hurt him that she’s had died no little than a month. In my opinion I feel that Laika felt sad without the narrator she had no concern for anything after he left. As a result of moving to the moon, the narrator’s life changed, because in the last sentence of the last paragraph in the last page of the book he says “Yet sometimes I wake now in the silence of the moon,… so that I could have looked in those luminous brown eyes brimming with and unselfish, undemanding love that I have found nowhere else on this or any other world.
He really loved Laika.He did regret leaving her.

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"My Memorable Day's"

1.      For my 13^th birthday I went out with my friends roller-skating, it was a very special day for me.

2.      When I was seven I got taken away from my mom and older brothers.

3.      When I used to live in Los Angeles I went to Disneyland one day and we Nicole Richie there.

4.      The first time I ever got suspended from school was when I was in 5^th grade.

5.      I remember everything that happened the FIRST day that I came to SPA :(

6.      When I was 12 my brother had died

7.      When I graduated from elementary school I was so excited to go to middle school.

8.      When I got my first dog I was in 3^rd grade.

9.      The first time I ever went to Mexico was when I was 8.

10.  When my “husband” Julian Casablanca’s from the band The Strokes got married.---------------------------->