Tuesday, November 30, 2010

First Persuasive Paragraph

Prompt A: Freshmen should/should not be allowed to go on self pass.

I feel that freshmen students should not be allowed to go on self-pass. Why? Our freshman class is very immature. If one of our students were to go on self pass, they are more tempted to do something stupid. Our freshmans have done silly things in the past and some still do it. They are still kids, and they are still learning to be more responsilbe. I think that self passes should only be given out to the people who have good grades, stay out of DRAMA, and trouble.

2 comments:

  1. Griselda what you are saying is very true. Our freshman class is very immature. You need to go over this paragraph some of it doesn't make sense.

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  2. This is true Griselda but remember to proof read it

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