Sunday, October 3, 2010

9/11 Paragraph

Jen was on her way going to school, eating breakfast you know the normal things people do before going to school, putting make up on. Her friends’ boyfriend called her on the phone and said turn on the TV America is being attacked. She turned it on and she saw the second plane go in and then saw the towers crumble on the TV. Jen tried to wake up her boyfriend at the time where she lived. He was asleep and didn’t understand what was going on. Jen also said everyone started calling each person that they new to see if they were OK and if they had more information than what the TV was talking about. She was terrified and didn’t know what to do.


  1. That is a very funny story Griselda.

  2. Wow, Griselda I like your story. By the way you have some run-on sentences.